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Post by Wingnut Sun Apr 15, 2012 8:18 pm

I sat with you in the dark till it was light
Calmed you down till morning became night
You’re asking if I thought that it was right,
I know one thing; I want no-one else but you.

Do you want to see emotion just as true?
Do you want to see me running right on through?
Do you know I’ll never know just what to do?
Without somebody, when that somebody is you.

I’m sending you a prayer when you feel cold
Metaphorically speaking I’m here to hold,
I stay up so late dreaming now its early doors
I await your reassurance that I’m still yours.

I feel just like a knight without a squire
I waded through the pain for your desire,
I’m acting like a fireman who’s scared of fire
I wanted to commit but then my confidence expired.

And when you gave that red light to engage
I never thought I’d write you off my page,
But then I guess my actions show my age
I had written you a chapter but then ripped it up today.

Henceforth if I ever publish books
Based upon your strong oppressive looks
I remember what we fought for was true love
And although we lost I had such fun.

If you want to read emotion just as true
If you want to read about me running right on through,
Then you will know I’ll never know just what to do
Without somebody, when that somebody is you.
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Post by chewy Sun Apr 15, 2012 9:24 pm

Gay as gay can be Wink

Very Happy
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Post by Wingnut Sun Apr 15, 2012 9:31 pm

cheers chewy
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Post by chewy Sun Apr 15, 2012 9:32 pm

Drunk? Stoned by Any chance?
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Post by Tedage Sun Apr 15, 2012 10:05 pm

As a songwriter, I am not impressed.

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Post by Wingnut Sun Apr 15, 2012 10:07 pm

ok ted cheers Smile
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Post by Guest Sun Apr 15, 2012 10:13 pm

love it!

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Post by Wingnut Sun Apr 15, 2012 10:22 pm

thankyou Sir potted Hogs Smile

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Post by beardface Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:38 am

big up wing for the bravest post in this forum so far !!
and congrats on the rhyming . . exquisite.
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Post by beardface Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:43 am

.... sorry to hear you feel like a 'knight whos lost his squire' though ....... bad times !
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Post by Wingnut Mon Apr 16, 2012 10:40 am

i know i have to carry my own shield and everything Sad
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Post by quind Mon Apr 16, 2012 11:11 am

coconuts or horses?

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Post by Wingnut Mon Apr 16, 2012 11:55 am

coco Nuts Smile
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Post by Wingnut Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:32 pm

Started up at Ridgeway’s on cloud nine
Met up with the pauper trying to buy time,
The salesman had broad shoulders and a cracked door
Sitting carving sculptures in the ice
Just waiting for the big thaw.

The feeling was euphoric hence the metaphor
This guy was like a bull in a china shop
I was the matador,
Balu the bear wrote the book on necessity
Since she had no rhythm I declined somewhat recessively,
It was my character thus I had no choice
Written in the notebook I dutifully carried to voice,
My own opinions scripted in chalk
And deep-rooted ignorance gave me no time to talk.

I would concede and conclude forthwith your victory
I would withhold your latest fit of jealousy
Why would we cry when our vocal cords gave pittance?
The papers delivered bad news and to that I say good riddance

In my greatest hour of need I could not speak
Being fuelled with such anger made me feel so weak,
When I most needed courage I was left alone
And when foresight was of paramount I was left blind
Not only could you humour me but it was also ironic
Now I wear a necklace with your name on it.
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Post by The Zec Mon Apr 16, 2012 7:32 pm

Sod Carol-Ann Duffy, Wing should be Poet Laureate!


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Post by Wingnut Mon Apr 16, 2012 10:04 pm

Maybe the Geordie Chaucer Wink
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Post by beardface Mon Apr 16, 2012 11:15 pm

Wor Chaucer.
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